Artist Statement Critiques

The instructor for the course has give feedback on artist statements in the form of a copied version below your original artist critique.
This is the key to decipher the crit

 Critique of Artist Statement:

Bold statements are items that are crucial to the artist statement and explain what is going on

Italics mean they should be deleted entirely, not necessary at all to the explination of the artwork.

Normal text (as is) is text that may or may not need to be deleted
but possibly should be re-written to fit BOLD important times.